This animation is a focus on the emotion eyes can portray. This character is supposed to be a young girl being yelled at by her Angry Aunt. The audio was taken from the 11 Second Club, although this piece was never entered.
Hey Tiffany, Here's my first critique on your blog: I think this is a good start. You did a good job on showing her guilt, but i feel that the part where she is cringing and afraid, could be exaggerated a bit more and held a bit longer. She seems to recover too quickly from being yelled at. I feel that the feeling of "being afraid" would linger.
Hey Tiffany, Here's my first critique on your blog:
ReplyDeleteI think this is a good start. You did a good job on showing her guilt, but i feel that the part where she is cringing and afraid, could be exaggerated a bit more and held a bit longer. She seems to recover too quickly from being yelled at. I feel that the feeling of "being afraid" would linger.
Hope that helps :]